I thought I was strong, I thought I could cope
I faced many sorrows, but I never lost hope
I kept them inside, I hid them away
I thought they would vanish, I thought they would fade
But they grew and grew, they piled up high
They formed a mountain of sadness, that reached the sky
One day, a storm came, a thunderous blast
It shattered the mountain, it broke it at last
All the pain and the grief, all the tears and the fears
They came rushing at me, they filled me with despair
I tried to escape, I tried to survive
But they were too many, they were too alive
I had no one to help me, no one to share
I felt so alone, I felt so scared
I longed for an end, I longed for a release
But they never stopped coming, they never ceased
And then, another sorrow, another blow
It hit me so hard, it crushed me so low
It was worse than before, it was more than I could bear
It added to the mountain, it made it harder to clear
Now I have to face it, all the before and now
All the sadness and pain, all the suffering and woe
And the fact that I'm alone, makes it harder to heal
Sometimes I don't wanna live, just because I don't wanna feel
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Srivats_1811 on 17 Jan 2024
deep
Udeeta Borpujari on 14 Jan 2024
Wow... amazing...