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Now you cannot make me cry,
Come on if you want to try.
You cannot hold me back,
I won’t tolerate any attack.
You cannot break me down into pieces,
You cannot buy me with your kisses.
You cannot lock me in a cage ,
I can burn you with my rage.
You cannot tie me with a rope ,
You cannot make me choke.
You cannot kill me,
Am indestructible like the water in a sea.
You cannot make me bow,
And that’s my vow!
Because I am filled with inspiration,
I am empowered to face every situation.
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Udeeta Borpujari on 05 Feb 2024
Glad u liked it
Udeeta Borpujari on 05 Feb 2024
Thank you so much
Meghana on 05 Feb 2024
Beautiful with strong message