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CHOICE OR DESTINY?
Eclectic adversities,
oozing through, askew.
Xnthic skin for ages,
is it really something new?
Paeans dissolving, into an ablaze abyss.
Enigmas devouring skin,
A home and solace paralleling to bliss.
Nightmarish days spent, daydreams reside in ghetto.
Sadistic fortune to someone, someone's stars larghetto.
Indispensable sweet and sour, incorporating a fault.
V oid within their star or choice?
That brought the abrupt hault?
Everyday, a life that is...?
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Tiyasha Arora on 19 Mar 2024
I feel like this poem could work as both from the perspective of poverty and middle class's struggles, fabulous!!
Yeontan Holly on 19 Mar 2024
Wow!! Love the acrostic <3