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Tired Angel

Poetry

BY Maskedup Girl
10 May 2024
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Tired Angel

#Broken # tired # angel # pain # hopeless.

She is a tired Angel.Angel, who heals everyone,........

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Manoj_Su on 11 May 2024

Liked the simplicity of the language, you could explore more about the internal conflict of the Tired Angel giving the poem more depth. Just a suggestion.

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- Maskedup Girl on 11 May 2024
  
  I like the suggestion. I'll keep note about it.
  
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Srivats_1811 on 10 May 2024

You've captured it perfectly 🎯

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- Maskedup Girl on 11 May 2024
  
  Thank you so much.
  
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Maskedup Girl

Eng I was shattered like leafs, Someone collect me, Just to burn me. Hindi Main pato ki tarah bikhri hui thi, Kisine sameta muje sirf aag laga ne ko.

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