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A million stars shining in the sky
In between the million miles there is no one like the queen of the sky
The queen of the sky ,serene beauty in the middle of night
Amidst the stars she is the queen of night
The moon to my heart,the moon to the sky
She is the queen of the night
The beauty that dazzles the sky
The middle of night she brighten my world
She is not only my queen
She is the queen of the night
With her stars,her mighty soldiers ,she dazzles the sky as the queen of night
A thousand stars can't hide her smile
She is the beauty of the sky
She is the queen of the night
The moon to my heart ,the moon to the sky
She is the queen of heart,queen of the night
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1 | Srivats_1811 | 1355 |
2 | Manish_5 | 403 |
3 | Kimi writes | 378 |
4 | Sarvodya Singh | 116 |
5 | AkankshaC | 93 |
6 | Udeeta Borpujari | 86 |
7 | Rahul_100 | 68 |
8 | Anshika | 53 |
9 | Srividya Ivauri | 52 |
10 | WriteRightSan | 52 |
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1 | Srivats_1811 | 1131 |
2 | Udeeta Borpujari | 551 |
3 | Rahul_100 | 242 |
4 | AkankshaC | 195 |
5 | Infinite Optimism | 179 |
6 | Anshika | 152 |
7 | Kimi writes | 150 |
8 | shruthi.drose | 142 |
9 | aditya sarvepalli | 139 |
10 | Manish_5 | 103 |
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Manoj_Su on 11 May 2024
The theme of the night's queen is captivating but try more consistency in tone throughout the poem ЁЯШК.