But you, with her,
You're so different, like a fresh ray of sunshine,
Like dandelions on the loose
Frail and fragile.
You look like another world's God-sent
Universe complimenting qualities,
Your laughter like ripples, hair falling into a cascade,
An aura so benign - fresh air and daisies.
You're happy and glowing
She makes you blush cherry,
If only I could keep watching
All that you define into wild and merry.
She is the reason you sublime into joy,
And I sublimate like camphor to your eyes,
Those eyes that shine and sparkle
Like the glitters of the sea against the setting sky.
Your smooth bare skin touch against mine
But you shift uncomfortably,
All the while feeling in your skin
As you bathe in her joys delectably
She could almost be your soulmate
You could almost be mine.
But for now I know I'm happy that you're happy,
I am content seeing your lips curve into a smile.
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